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Andrew Pair's avatar

This was engrossing, with shades of horror and mysticism. Great job! I was really impressed at how well you built the atmosphere, there were moments when I could feel like I was seeing the world through Will’s eyes. This was good, man!

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VedJournal ✍️📜's avatar

Hey Zossima, that's an amazing part of the story. I went back to nostalgia to experience it.

"His parents had told him never to go out alone. Especially at night. Especially after the disappearances."

Many Children gone through this phase

Thanks for sharing and keep writing 👏👍

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